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– my take on some of the outstanding writing on my bookshelf

The book I wanted to write was one with interwoven timelines. So I took out whole subplots, whole scenes, whole characters, until I got the book down to a reasonable length. I sent it to the editor. It came back with lots of, “You need more here” and “This should be a scene not a transition”.

A young man who sets off into the wilderness with the intention of living off the land and fails to live at all